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August 17, 2011
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NIKON CORPORATION
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Aug 17, 2011, 11:36:50 AM
Microsoft Windows Photo Gallery 6.0.6000.16386
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:iconhinyness:
I also drew this in germany.
Please do not observe her breasts :p
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The lighting is a bit off. The rays of sunshine look a bit dark, yes i know its a sketch without color, but the rays are a bit too shaded. You might want to squint the opened eye just a bit. The hair could be a bit less shaded on the side where the shine is.

What I really like is that you did a good job with the shading of both arms; some for the one underneath her breasts, the other less since it's covering her face. And the shadow of her arm on her face.

There's you critique. My first critique on DA. Hope it helps.
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Mood: Love ~Hinyness Aug 18, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Well ive had much tougher critique on my pics, so this one is like a walk in the park. Ive been very unsecure when it comes to making more complex drawings. Im actually more into simple pictures (not too detailed). I like to draw them like they were taken out of an anime clip.
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Well I don't try to make a critique with anger, nor do I try to sugarcoat either. Just as long as you get my opinion.

Even with something with a lot of cons, I try to look for at least one reasonable pro.
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