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December 7, 2012
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LG Electronics
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LG-E400
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Dec 7, 2012, 11:59:57 AM
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Girl in vest by Hinyness Girl in vest by Hinyness
My pictures have been too straight forward and im working on getting new angles into my drawings to give it more veriety and this one is just the start. Im thinking of doing a nice big project, but its still in my mind and i still need to figure out how big and detailed its going to be and won't be coming out too soon.
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I'd say your technique's pretty nice :3
Great anatomy and shadows, the eyes are just right and while people usually struggle with side views of the face, you have done a pretty decent job!
The contrasts between the blue and the red attracts the eyes but appart from that, you're missing important elements.

It'd be nice to see something with a concept or something more... rememberable. Maybe a nice background or some light plays. Your character looks great but she lacks an important aspect that will make others react to her nicely and so that when they see more of her, they'll say "Hey, I remember that character!"
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1Gaaralover Jan 5, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
The profile looks very nice ^^ really like how you colored this and put the highlights, nice job
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:iconhinyness:
Hinyness Jan 5, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you! :)
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:icon1gaaralover:
1Gaaralover Jan 5, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
your welcome ^^
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